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Davros92
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The major flaw in this type of work is the same: social isolation. Humans were made to grow in society, a forum is not a substitute for that. Do you want to make this story interesting? Make the MC start to wonder if the forum really is real people, nothing: - I have a system to be jealous of. Make MC want to use the system trying to escape. The essence of this story should be a prison break, not instagram competition.

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Exploring the Wilderness: Activating Proficiency in All Professions

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GrandpaPeng
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If these authors wrote that, I bet they would end up like the author of Reverend Insanity: getting their novel banned and being forced by chinese government to apologize for using independent thought and creative ideas to make his MC question authority and overcome those who rule him, who dictate him what he does, who force him to play their dirty games.. The authors are forced to write about good governments always protecting people, about how the invigilation systems and technological slavery is great and also forced to never deal with cause (e.g. to write a plot where MC is smart and makes a decision to find and defeat the preparators, survival game makers right from the start and then see the bigger world) but to deal with effect (try to survive, kill other people who get forced to play the game with him, do what they tell him to do etc).

DaPashini
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Lol, that's what I was exactly thinking. On other thoughts, I do wish the author somehow tries to complete Reverend Insanity. I have been waiting for chapter 2335 for a long time.

GrandpaPeng:If these authors wrote that, I bet they would end up like the author of Reverend Insanity: getting their novel banned and being forced by chinese government to apologize for using independent thought and creative ideas to make his MC question authority and overcome those who rule him, who dictate him what he does, who force him to play their dirty games.. The authors are forced to write about good governments always protecting people, about how the invigilation systems and technological slavery is great and also forced to never deal with cause (e.g. to write a plot where MC is smart and makes a decision to find and defeat the preparators, survival game makers right from the start and then see the bigger world) but to deal with effect (try to survive, kill other people who get forced to play the game with him, do what they tell him to do etc).