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FabledYak
FabledYakLv43yr
2021-08-17 22:56

Interesting story line. Pretty good writing, Grammer and spelling. Want to read more of it, could have done better with a few things like using the system a tiny bit more. After Adam returns from the Zerg planet, the system isn't even used once up to chapter 40 latest chapter. There is also barely any details of cultivating or practising techniques. World building needs attention as well but overall I like it and will continue reading.

Super Hint System: Everyone is a Cultivator

A Little Demon Fish
2.8
40 Chs

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hellomotot
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The MC is so stupid. He just mentions his legacy to everyone just hoping they will keep a secret Also he is just an idiot who does anything for females . Stupid and idiotic premise where MC acts without any plans or smartness

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Grandmist_Sage
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petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

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GrandpaPeng
GrandpaPengLv4

Good idea and premise, but very bad execution. I even wonder whether MC sacrificed his brains to obtain this system because his dialogue is so childish, behaviour unfit for the story. Action is too rushed. One chapter he worries about being cannon fodder the next chapter he's already throwing S scrolls while a decent family can only have enough resources for 1 B scroll maybe. Then the next chapter he brags to a girl like a cuckold, and another chapter in she invites him to her family as a guest. Then they all go ham and get all lively and childish in what's supposed to be a very dangerous threatening zone. It's one f*** big mess. Do yourself a favor and skip this novel

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Mithren
MithrenLv13

The story is interesting... but the writing is bad. There is no weight behind what happens. Feed a guy or rescue a person and bam instant hero status. Literally a surface level story lacking in even the slightest depth. I'm not even sure if this is good enough for mindless reading. As always there is the potential that the writing quality improves over time but I honestly think it needs a rewrite from the author to reach the potential that is there even if difficult to see.

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Oto
OtoLv14

Webnovel is just a sad excuse for a company. That also extends to China Literature and their owner, Tencent. Tencent is too focused on copying from the world to realize it should work on improving its management. China is truly showing the world its finest idiots!

3yr
emotional
emotionalLv14

Read a few chapters and then removed from library.... MC is way too naive, or maybe the author thinks that people can interact in such a situation like that. way too flashy in the beginning

3yr
Aminul1999
Aminul1999Lv13

wonderful novel should be selected for publishing it now and please don't put it in taking a break. because if it is gotten put into taking a break then it have to take break for the rest of his life.

3yr
IMoney
IMoneyLv3

Not a fan personally ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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AskAndzar
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Haiz Why are there a lot of novel like this recently. I hope webnovel has something like a quality control. Don't just upload everything. Pick something good.

3yr
Kotic
KoticLv5

his an idiot🙄................................................................ .............................................................

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