The story is interesting... but the writing is bad. There is no weight behind what happens. Feed a guy or rescue a person and bam instant hero status. Literally a surface level story lacking in even the slightest depth. I'm not even sure if this is good enough for mindless reading. As always there is the potential that the writing quality improves over time but I honestly think it needs a rewrite from the author to reach the potential that is there even if difficult to see.
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