Item: World Magic: I Awakened Light and Dark Magic Attributes
Rating: 2.4
Author: whadip

whadipLv43yr

2021-06-25 12:37

Not a bad premise, cliche but bearable. The writing needs a ton of work. More descriptions and more excitement, there's a certain blandness to it, the writing quality really needs a lotttttt of improvement. Read but don't take it serious. If the author tries to improve the story will too.

World Magic: I Awakened Light and Dark Magic Attributes

Truly Miserable

3.5

40 Chs

Liked by 4 people

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AeternabilisLv14

Also, from a trial novel, you would expect the grammar to be at least decent. I mean I have read fanfics with better grammar xD

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kadri_alLv1

what fanfic title it?

Aeternabilis:Also, from a trial novel, you would expect the grammar to be at least decent. I mean I have read fanfics with better grammar xD

3yr

AeternabilisLv14

Wdym?

kadri_al:what fanfic title it?

3yr

DarkloadLv13

lol fanfics most of the time they start in English

Aeternabilis:Also, from a trial novel, you would expect the grammar to be at least decent. I mean I have read fanfics with better grammar xD

3yr

LamiansLv10

RAW. Thank me later. 全球魔法：开局觉醒光暗属性

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whadipLv4

Oh. I don't mind spoilers, do tell? How much better is it? So is it the translator's fault? Also I'm a peasant who doesn't know Chinese only mtl for me. Have my hands full with a third language already no time for that S ranked alien characters, yet at least.

Lamians:RAW. Thank me later. 全球魔法：开局觉醒光暗属性

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