Review Detail of Daniel_Massie in old MRG File

The over all writing quality is well done with few grammatical errors. The story development is rather good at least to chapter 87 so far it's fun,funny, with well placed humor and various things to keep track of. The character design is rather well done as each character does have their own personality for the most part from what I can see and backstory too. The update stability seems rather stable so far with not much of any lapse that I can see. As for world background it is well done so far and seems rather well thought out as of yet even if the story has not gone too far yet.