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Im not so sure the novel is finished but I have noticed a LOT of webnovels stories are all ending around a month ago. A lot of them are Chinese light novels too. I am not too sure what that is about but it seems to be a trend.
I have to say that being able to add in ant sports which at first seemed completely unrelated became something I would look forward to more later on. Maybe even seeing the after effects of such training in future battles. On another note being able to write 10+ chapters not about the MC and make it feel so natural is VERY enjoyable to read yet probably hard to do. I thank you for the chaps they were great!
The author has done this quite a few times by NIW and instead of fixing the issue after he still leaves it which shows that the copy lasting is intentional. I am getting tired of him doing this. If he skipped a chapter posting to keep content accurate I wouldn't even mind but he seems to be doing it to keep up his "quota" which is b.s. to do. If he keeps doing this I suggest going back and finding the chapters he has deliberately done this to and reporting it due to how many times he gas done it.
As a story it's fun, a bit amusing at times, can be sometimes cliche but not overly. Some things do get semi predictable but not too badly. The writing quality is well done with few grammatical errors that I remember from most the story. Story development is good but not great. It's a good story and develops well enough. The characters are a bit diverse and have personality but in the end are kind of the stereotypical types too for some. The story had some dumb parts, some good parts, and even some points which got boring but that is what flashes it out too. The world background is okay, yet gets kind of "typical" for a cultivation novel and the main changes were based in a few ways but over all acceptable. Would I read it again if I didn't know it already yes I would. It's worth the read, that being said now that I know the story is it worthy of multiple reads through? I'm not so sure it is but it's not bad as well.