Review Detail of Daniel_Massie in old MRG File

This story so far is rather amusing and fun. The writing quality is as far as I can tell rather well done with as far as i can remember no typos and great grammar. The story development is great so far and things progress not as you would always expect. The characters are relatively well designed and have so far different personalities but are not entirely fleshed out yet it seems. Update stability seems good for now it's been at least one a day so far. World background is slightly lacking but I mean so far they have not gone far either it's the beginning of the story so can't really give 5stars even if I'm at chapter 68.