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LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv123yr
2021-07-02 17:49

Why do people seem to like this? I can't find anything interesting or special about this novel. Avarage writing, avarage World building. You can see the story development from miles away and the MC is a total idiot. Non of this makes sense. The MC Master is one of the worst offenders, she is literally the most useless thing in this novel. The Demon sect is petty thieves sect with strict morals. The Cultivation systems are stupidly complicated and serve no purpose. An immortal is literally weaker than a mortal in mind and fortitude. Even the most sheltered snail can gain a little wisdom after living for 30 years, the cultivators in this novel can not. This novel is meant to be funny, it isn't. It is meant to be exciting, it isn't. It is meant to be surprising full of plot twists, IT IS NOT. The MC is an hypocrite, dumb as a door and a waste of space and opportunity.

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ANONYMOUS_SHADOW
ANONYMOUS_SHADOWLv4

ever heard of comedy? or gag novels? or maybe other books with lack of common sense?

LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv12

Yes Difference is they are funny.

ANONYMOUS_SHADOW:ever heard of comedy? or gag novels? or maybe other books with lack of common sense?
Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

he said that he doesn't find this novel funny and that the comedy is bad, read the review

ANONYMOUS_SHADOW:ever heard of comedy? or gag novels? or maybe other books with lack of common sense?
Lord_Meph1sto
Lord_Meph1stoLv13

This novel is a good light read. Its better than most of the novel in this batch. I would rather read smtg like this rather than the action novels coming out these days.

ANONYMOUS_SHADOW
ANONYMOUS_SHADOWLv4

well he might have different sense of humor i guess.

Space_Fox:he said that he doesn't find this novel funny and that the comedy is bad, read the review
ANONYMOUS_SHADOW
ANONYMOUS_SHADOWLv4

well he might have different sense of humor i guess.

Space_Fox:he said that he doesn't find this novel funny and that the comedy is bad, read the review
You_me_6195
You_me_6195Lv4

i'm with you bro i mean only read chapter 1 i'm already disappointed i feel like the mc just following the systems every order this novel meant to be a sad story

complexsolution
complexsolutionLv11

Ofc he's going to follow system's (villainous) shameless missions, but he will also use "holes" or other way to accomplish it on some quest.

You_me_6195:i'm with you bro i mean only read chapter 1 i'm already disappointed i feel like the mc just following the systems every order this novel meant to be a sad story
complexsolution
complexsolutionLv11

You have pretty high standards dude well I guest your requirements... it is what it is.

You_me_6195
You_me_6195Lv4

just imagine someone you care about just died in front of you then your find him still alive how much do you think the girl supper this is really sad story

complexsolution:You have pretty high standards dude well I guest your requirements... it is what it is.
complexsolution
complexsolutionLv11

I'm talking to the one who wrote the review, I think he's just finding fault for every book he read. See his latest moments, he left comments and review to those he call "not so good" but I cannot see any comment to those book he fancy. Ya I don't mind criticism but I think his, is too much. You shouldn't read book just to find fault (Why I said so? ffs! if it is good enough for him so be it, if not then let's-write-a-review). Well it's his own choice. Nvm Ermm imma head out of here Ciao!

You_me_6195:just imagine someone you care about just died in front of you then your find him still alive how much do you think the girl supper this is really sad story
You_me_6195
You_me_6195Lv4

sorry bro took your second comment for me

complexsolution:I'm talking to the one who wrote the review, I think he's just finding fault for every book he read. See his latest moments, he left comments and review to those he call "not so good" but I cannot see any comment to those book he fancy. Ya I don't mind criticism but I think his, is too much. You shouldn't read book just to find fault (Why I said so? ffs! if it is good enough for him so be it, if not then let's-write-a-review). Well it's his own choice. Nvm Ermm imma head out of here Ciao!
complexsolution
complexsolutionLv11

Yah high standards, I think he/she is an Englsh or Literature prof, he can apply as Panel nmy school lol he/she'll be labelled as "terrorprof" lame no fun at all.

LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv12

Nope, sry. Just a student, system engineer.

complexsolution:Yah high standards, I think he/she is an Englsh or Literature prof, he can apply as Panel nmy school lol he/she'll be labelled as "terrorprof" lame no fun at all.
NexIzich
NexIzichLv15

I'm guessing you are more into murder hobo MCs?

LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv12

No, I am a fan of consistent worlds with characters that fit the circumstances of those worlds. Nothing is worse, in my opinion, than characters that are removed from their own lives. There is no character development to be had.

NexIzich:I'm guessing you are more into murder hobo MCs?
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