This novel is actually pretty funny, especially the part where she goes KABOOM The genius loli got me by the hook, so now I am reading this, and I sure hope you are too! Cant wait to read more of your works, author! The only thing that I can advise is the usage of terms. You need to include the definition of a "loli" and other things included in your novel(I guess) since the term came from Japan. Not everyone would know it at first glance, so adding a meaning might help it.
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