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2022-01-26 03:03

Very good book. But not consistant in uploads. lhtyhjbbjujjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj

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Okay so if I had to say what are the two emotions you feel when you read this novel? I would say I love and I hate it at the same time...This review might be a bit long but I hope to explain why I love and hate it. Writing quality is by no means perfect, I have seen several mistakes here and there but more or less the number of mistakes isn't too much disturbing for me. Now I hate the update schedule right now tbh I mean leaving a story at a cliffhanger and the last update is 8 days before?? (this novel seems to have released at least 1 chapter within 2 days till now). Author-san, if you were in the same room as me, I would have stabbed you with a knife due to anxiousness. Welp about the story development, I'm the kind of person who believes that an Author should write a story from his own standpoint. Other than grammatical errors or update schedules there shouldn't be a change in plot or ideas due to public sentiment and I respect your author for sticking with your plot. But I will state that I don't find myself happy with the story. It's not exactly a fluffy fluffy story(i didn't want a fluffy fluffy but not as dark as this one) and everything happened too sudden and terrifyingly...There comes a moment of cool breeze and then it suddenly turns into a hurricane. I can't even count how many times my heart broke from the sudden shift from fluffy to dark as obsidian. But I do find this novel to be addictive although I pray to myself that the future won't be as bleak as it till now. So my four stars for story development is kind of like my own personal gripe, nothing wrong with the author... Alright, character design is good but I will definitely say that the MC personality changes were indeed extremely sharp and confusing. Welp some of the well-developed characters leaving the "stage" has left me quite heartbroken. I guess that is a reminder of how good characters are developed? (welp I want the P and D back....) now the world design of this novel is still extremely confusing and I guess it's meant to stay that way? I guess the world information would get clarified later in the novel since I believe this novel will easily go beyond 200 chapters. Now Overall I would say this is a good novel... Don't expect fluffy or easy-going story cause you will die of a heart attack and author-san please never drop this novel and welp I hope you release more chapters frequently(i-if it isn't much a m-mass release wouldn't be too b-bad) GOOD DAY!

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