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Kehdkams
KehdkamsLv12yr
2022-06-15 17:42

I really liked the first volume. I like the settings, and the plot. However, after that, everything suddenly changes. I got so confused. It was as if this book was given to an entirely different author. The style of the book, the dynamics, and the pace of the story all changed drastically. I feel like the people who like this book would need to be as flexible as the author in their taste in books. This seriously feels like 2 books that has been meshed together, and I'm not sure I like this very much. I'll try to get through it, but I'm not loving this so far. (I'm on chapter 70-ish)

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Kehdkams
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SPOILER ALERT Also... I feel like the personality of the MC suddenly changes after the first volume. She turned from an incredibly cold person to a super trusting girl. Her growth pace πŸ“‰πŸ“‰πŸ“‰. Shouldn't things go better for you after a reincarnation? Cuz things are definitely not. She turned from a ruthless and cold MC to a flower girl. I know that she sealed her emotions in her second life, but she was already cold and ruthless before that. How can she suddenly become the way she is now? I am at chapter 76 now, and reading any further is making me cringe. I don't want to be rude or mean, but this is how I feel.

Chiken_Sheep
Chiken_SheepAuthor

Thank you for the feedback! Although it might not seem like it, it is helpful. I'll work on it so that I can make the best story that I can, I hope you and the other readers will enjoy the newer chapters more than the early ones. This is my first 'big' book so don't go expecting a masterpiece. All the best, -Author Also, don't tell anyone this but I plan to rewrite a large portion of the first 2 volumes of the story after it is complete.

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