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Updated review: The story is quite unique and the scale is incredible, I'll give this novel that. The major problems I have with the novel is lack of description. It just says things happen with no good justification, there are barely any units or measurements, and if your lucky barely comprehensible analogies. If it takes using dogs running an unstandard measuring unit and comparing it to regular humans and now to the super soldiers, why bother, just say he can now travel at 200mph with some flair instead of this horribly unnecessary method. Then comes the world's internal logic. With the later chapters around 60-72 you may see some of my paragraph comments that go into far, far more detail.
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Thanks for the response, also don't take my paragraph comments as hatred of the novel, its pretty good, far better than anything else i've read in a bit. My only real annoyance was the star species vs the human warships, but there are other fictions with far less realistic power scaling so eh.
Bobbydale_Murr:Thank you for the criticism, i will say with guilt that i do tend to talk in comparison more than i should. ill try and elaborate more. Just didn't believe serious talk would make for a fun experience.
Ah i see the issue. Those are actually not human warships. I just compared them to human warships to give a scale. the creatures i talk about. the Ignus Enus is an entirely different species that is an extreme warrior race, more so than humanity even. but it isnt their weapons that caused the stars destruction.
DoctorBlaze:Thanks for the response, also don't take my paragraph comments as hatred of the novel, its pretty good, far better than anything else i've read in a bit. My only real annoyance was the star species vs the human warships, but there are other fictions with far less realistic power scaling so eh.