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Vyktor
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2022-10-16 08:55

A very good read. The author take the games script, and add his own touch, making it "How I would have played it if it was a full VR and I could do what I want" The MC is Shepard (not an isekai or anything, the human Shepard), that go with his life and his choices like we did in the games (but more freedom than us player, the like we would love to have). Its really interesting and fun, I recommend it. (Only point I'm not really fan, but it's only personal preference, too much s*c scenes, they are well written, but after 10 or 15 of them I skip it because I'm more interested by the story than it 😅)

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hackwriter29
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Thanks for the review. Glad you've (mostly) enjoyed it

Vyktor
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It's just a personal preference (your story is a full meal, but too much dessert for me 🤣). The way the story is wrorlte is good, and even if I skip the scenes it's not a problem to follow and understand everything, and it's a perfect way to write it, you make the S-Scenes something interesting but not essential to understand the story, and I could choose to skip them without loosing anything (at last from my point of view as a reader, I don't feel like I missed an important part of the story that put a hole in my understanding). 😋👍

hackwriter29:Thanks for the review. Glad you've (mostly) enjoyed it
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