Item: Phoenix in MHA
Rating: 4.6
Author: Mana_Mannequin_003

Mana_Mannequin_003Lv153yr

2021-09-21 23:07

so far what you have written is pretty solid for a fan fic. keep up the good writting and please dont try to inject the MC into the main story of the anime, alot of fan fics try that and it ruins the story. something like a while that is happening the mc is doing something major to the side is always good.

Phoenix in MHA

Rolling_thunder_

Not enough ratings

18 Chs

Liked by 1 people

Replies3

Rolling_thunder_Author

Thanks for the review. I'll try my best and hope you like it.

3yr

Mana_Mannequin_003Lv15

keep it up i am enjoying reading this one.

3yr

leoreview1Lv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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Rolling_thunder_Author

Hello guys. Author here. This is my first time in attempting writing other than my exams. So that's how big of a newbie I am. So if you are willing to give some constructive criticism be my guest. For the people who don't like my story sorry but I'm not sorry. For the people who like the story please drop in a review or a comment that would be appreciated. If I make some mistake please let me know what it is I'm totally new to this. Thank you for the read. I appreciate it.

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