Mana_Mannequin_003

this one

wonderful world building and power scaling. Definitely a must read among pokemon fan-fic.

definitely the best pokemon fanfic i have read. the character development is great, not to fast amd not to slow.

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

same

keep it up i am enjoying reading this one.

so far what you have written is pretty solid for a fan fic. keep up the good writting and please dont try to inject the MC into the main story of the anime, alot of fan fics try that and it ruins the story. something like a while that is happening the mc is doing something major to the side is always good.

please dont go back. i think everything has been done really well and like others have said whats done is done. can't wait to see what you have instore for us.

thanks for the chapter can't wait for more

would love to have more chapters to read. found the narrative fro. the system to be very funny and so far the best that i have come across. thanks