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TaintedMetalLv23yr
2021-05-24 13:12

Well, this was quite the read truth be told. The title pretty much says it all when it comes to maids, cause well, if they weren't in the story, this novel would have such a title. With many things (wacky things at most) happening as you read, it will take time to decipher what exactly the end goal is at the eventual end, although it's still a long road for that. Despite of this, the author does a good job at grabbing the reader's attention. The early chapters have something going on at most. Only criticism I have would be the setting, there's not much going on so hopefully that will be the case in the future. If you're a fan of anime that includes maids as either a comedic device or is essential to the plot, then this book might be just for you. Keep on writing author.

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AimanFaroqqLv15

this is my thought on this novel after reading up to 48 chapters i will be dead honest, this is a novel that i must say.. a hidden gem with extremely big potential to grow with good marketings. It has nice story, good and normal pace plot development, and good character development. I prefer you to put the power level in this world as we still don't know how does one determine their strength. I wish you will have these in the future but anyway its a good novel for me to spend my money on but at the same time, this novel have something that might make veteran readers burst into anger. First of all, although i said the character development is good, the way you write it out can piss people off. I almost threw my phone out of anger reading the first 40 chapter. Yes you want to make MC a naive dumb boy but smart i can accept that, but you exaggerate it. You make him look like a beta japanese male weeb in japan. I suggest you need to fastened his maturity progression in the next 10 chapters or veteran readers will immediately drop this novel. Also about Aleshia, just like I said, u exaggerate it. You make her way too paranoid and this will leave reader a bad taste in their mouth regarding her. Its nice to see a proper relationship progression over his maids one by one as to make the story longer and interesting but dont make it too out of line that it disrespect MC dignity as a noble. Also he is not giving any punishment at all. I would like to see all his maids total obedience to him Also for future readers.. i suggest you all to fast read chapter 1 to 40 as to avoid you leaving this novel.Trust me you will be eager to swipe your card past those chapters. Also trust me as long author not losing few screws in the head for future development, this novel will be a good workout for your slumbering dragon. I will give 4* at the moment because of the updates, character development and world background. I will give 5* after this have more chapters, clarification on power level and a better, brave and mature MC with his maids not being so paranoid. Best of luck. I have insulted and scolded a lot of authors in webnovel considering how they are so terrible making improvement in their novels. I have high expectation on this. Dont let me down My 💰 on you

PyconXDLv11

Look, I sacrificed and read everything (64 ch's), I don't know why the author dragged such a bad start, he wanted to show a character evolution while increasing the mc's strength, but it took a long time and I bet that's why he lost so many readers , it was a good read, I don't lie, I liked what happened from chapter 45 on, it was torture to read before that, but it was good even after the fight with the noble devil , it has potential, but you need to prepare to read in 40 very frustrating chapters, until this chapter the mc will be weak, fearful, perverted, cowardly... so far it was the worst mc I've ever seen, but in chapter 40, something happens to him that changes everything, besides changing his personality, he gets stronger and more confident, in addition to correcting some of his flaws, he doesn't become the best mc's, but he's readable. The story is good, after chapter 40 it gets very interesting, if you wait until then, you'll like it. Writing Quality: 5.0 (I don't complain about this, I didn't find any errors) Update stability: 5.0 (I don't follow since the beginning, but since I started every day new chapters have been posted) Story development: 5.0 (the story is great, it has everything to last a hundred chapters, but the MC development is depressing and frustrating because it takes so long) Character designs: 1.0 (only 4 things are quoted from the characters: whether he's handsome or not, apparent age, hair color and whether he's fat or thin, it's kind of hard to imagine the characters with these descriptions where they don't even talk about details , not even for the main characters) World Background: 2.0 (difficult to assess, almost nothing has been presented yet) PS; But the next arc has a lot of potential, I confess that I'm a little excited about it, so I can increase my score more, remembering that the soap opera is at the beginning, there's a lot to happen, I'm not offending this comment, but I give my honest opinions about romance.

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