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thelolguy2000
thelolguy2000Lv23yr
2021-10-05 07:22

Story is really good but there are occasional crammar and spelling mistakes. Character degelopment is decent but mc’s emotions are just all over the place and don’t machup with regular behavior and also the context of the situation. Overall a really good story MC needs some work

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