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ZaUsTLv103yr
2021-06-18 05:03

Writing Quality is as good as it can be (with some error's here and there but not anything major). Stability of Updates. With 2 chaps a day is really good, you can always comeback the next day and read 2 more chapters. Story Development is a bit slow in the start, but it builds up in later chapters, and frankly is really good. Character Design is a bit lacking in my opinion as I don't really know what the mc is looking like, other than he looks like his father, and what we were told in chapter 1. World Background is really good but slow, we first really get some world building in later chapter (around chapter 60) Altogether a really good story with good upload schedule, super immersed in the world, and is really looking forward to what happens next!

The Guardians' Throne - The First Magic Swordsman

ExSoldierLv99
4.6
497 Chs

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IcyHot
IcyHotLv13

does the grammar improve from the beginning chapters or not?

3yr
ZaUsT
ZaUsTLv10

It does improve somewhat early on, don't know when specifically though. And if you just enjoy the story its not even noticeable tbh :) (i've seen way wayyyyyy worse grammar on this website also)

IcyHot:does the grammar improve from the beginning chapters or not?
3yr
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ExSoldierLv99
ExSoldierLv99Author

What you will find in this novel, dear reader? A story of a soul that stayed for a long time in the darkness and is transmigrated to another world with a simple job: protect someone. Maybe the fate of the world will be decided if he suceeeds or not.

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GooseOverlord
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Reveal spoiler

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BookMountainMaster
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The One the best review is the no review... because you can't describe it in words... All the best to the novel... [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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Shiph
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FluffyFabu
FluffyFabuLv14

I was totally shocked, when I saw that nobody is reviewing this work. I'm not an english native speaker so pls have mercy. :) From the start on the author shows us a quality of writing, which is a pleasure to read. The story starts a bit confusing and anticlimatic but it evolved in a masterpiece in my opinion. From beginn on the author gives us daily 2 Chapters, except on Weekends. Since today the Story is going premium (congrats author) we have to see how it is going to be now. The World is quite unknown and we discover it along the story. I really like the characters and I'm looking forward to some more and development of the MC. How will he grow up? All in all I only want to encourage the Author to keep up this fantastic story and give you people the recommendation to follow us along this exciting journey.

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LuckyGamer95
LuckyGamer95Lv11

This review is based on reading 14 chapters(up-to-date). The premise of the story is enticing and presented in a well-written manner that is easy to understand. I like that the author does not use the first few chapters to swamp the readers with a slew of setting and plot information. Instead, the story progresses in a natural manner, where you learn about the world and its rules along with the protagonist. I recommend this novel to readers that enjoy transmigration novels with fantasy elements. The main character is not overpowered from the beginning so I look forward to his strength progression. The only issue I have is the lack of available chapters to read. I detest waiting for single chapter daily updates and selfishly ask the author to release more frequently if possible.

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Thee_AngryBird
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not a bad read... 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👏👏👏🔥👏🔥👏👏👏🔥👏🔥👏👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥

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UrsoNadador
UrsoNadadorLv3

The work is simply sublime! Lyra is the best character, too bad she left us early, but she never let us down! The author is to be congratulated, job very well done. I know the story is good when I feel part of my soul leaving with its ending, the ending is also perfect! My thanks to the author. I will miss Lyra, Ameria, Milliandra and Aleni. My only sadness is not seeing Aleni's children.

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Ceiro
CeiroLv4

The story might have been better without reading the prologue, I kept thinking about it and trying to find the link for the first few chapters.

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