Review Detail of theanimemail in MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)

So, it's a pretty interesting story, but the author doesn't really understand how to use commas and positively refuses to use grammar checkers (e.g., Grammarly, Quilbot, etc.); this makes it so that pretty much every chapter has at least 1-2 spelling errors, way too many run-on sentences, and awkward-sounding dialogues as a result of the lack of commas and proper punctuation. Now, while I'm slightly annoyed that the author is willing to spend so much time writing and planning out a pretty good story but isn't willing to spend an extra 3-5 minutes to drastically improve the final product, I have to say that I've enjoyed the story. Law as a character improves as a person, the side characters don't feel too 1-dimensional, though I do think they could've used a lot more development, and the setting and MC's powers are interesting enough. Edit (CHAPTER 285 (Classroom Tension)): I think this needs to be stated as well: the author is pretty bad at bringing emotional scenes to life; they just tell us people are sad in the blandest ways possible, with little to no nuance or, well, weight, for a lack of a better term, behind the scenes (so, in summary, this is an issue of too much tell and too little show when it comes to character nuance and motivation). Overall, I'd give this a read but know that the above flaws are prevalent throughout the book and barely improve as the book progresses.