From the small amount of chapters I have read, I can tell the MC is not very tolerable. At the start is alright, development is fine. But when he and his mother encounter Hawks and three other heroes the MC becomes this half assed character that suddenly lost his years of experience with assassination and escape, he became emotional too easily which should be pretty much impossible as he has to have lessons in emotional control, as that is a very important aspect of an assassin. Not good, but not terrible. While I think it would be a good read, I can't tolerate MC's that get emotional too easily even when they have a lot of experience in an area that needs a good amount of control over your emotions.
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