Item: Is it wrong to be a girl in a dungeon?
Rating: 5
Author: Spading

SpadingLv23yr

2021-11-02 09:02

The writing is just incredible. Immersion is amazing. Grammar has some errors but nothing major. The past of the MC is intriguing and it makes the FanFic better too. Overall Great FanFic.

Is it wrong to be a girl in a dungeon?

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