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Time_StoriesLv13yr
2022-01-19 11:12

All of the reviews are lying about the writing quality because while it isn't the worse I've seen, It definitely isn't enough to give it 5 stars. It wouldn't have been enough to put me off, the fact there is little to no punctuation, but the sentences just do not flow so I had to stop reading. Everything else is okay, the stability is twice a month, the story development is slow but reasonable and the character design is decent. All I can say is, I don't know why there aren't more bad reviews.

Is it wrong to be a girl in a dungeon?

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4.7
54 Chs

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Moonlight757966
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This novel ❤️😍❤️. And a great way you write it Make me look forward to more Chapter's . I hope you don't stop this novel plz keep the good work in it & Make it better than ever. & Also don't Listen to Negative opinion to much Just take the Useful one from it and leave the rest. Best ragrds & have good day .☺️💗

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Su_shi
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This story had a lot of yummy potential cant wait for more ❤️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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alesjandritos
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The story has a good potential. Keep up the good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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tyu_al
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the protagonist's development during the story so far has been well developed, the way you present her emotions and how she acts realistically made me really like the story. The only point that left something to be desired in the story is the grammar but as the chapters go by is be able to see the improvement

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kokolilo_8
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this story is on wattpat, now the question is are you the same one who wrote it there. On the other hand, if you are that person, let me tell you that I love your stories.

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author please dont listen to those h8ers, this is a really good story and u did an amazing job theres almost no good yuri on the site so pls pls update more

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Random_Creator_101
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Great fanfic over all just a few paragrpahs here and there than are blatantly copied from the origanl which is chill as it is not just a rewritten origanal with a character written into the scenes. Love the fanfic keep writing! Not a five star due to the above mentioned...

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Fallensnug
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One word.. potential. Authors with good/creative imaginations like this deserve praises. The story is still new so show me what you got, Author-kun!

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