Review Detail of Lord_Nyx in Fallen for my sex slave

The fact that you don't understand the story quite well from the beginning doesn't make my story lame 🥺or give you a reason to bad mouth my story.... This is my first online story that I'm writing and so far I've been trying my best to live up to so many peoples expectations...I'm not perfect😔...i know I have some grammatical errors and fail to project my story on a literal lane... So please consider a person's feelings before saying what you're not sure about