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Lord_Nyx1yrCommentedyou don't answer someone who just asked about what you were just doing in that manner when they correctly guessed it... you say "Indeed, it is (add name)"
"It's Bajiquan." Shishio wiped clean his sweat and said, "I will take a bath first, Shiro-san, then I will cook breakfast, do you want to join?"- Lord_Nyx2yrCommented
this whole paragraph is confusing
" Just in case.....so you'd know , if you mess with me young lady.....it is pop you up . I'm known by my Nick name ' Wildcat ' . You fuck up?, I'd deal with you. Understood?" The woman asked and Becca nodded as she swallowed. - Lord_Nyx2yrCommented
there is an unspoken rule of storywriting: never insert yourself into your own fiction. The reason is because it causes a massive disruption in the fictitious setting that has been created.
"Have a good day at school!" Lucian's mother hugs him with a bright warm smile her big soft pillowy oppai smoosh up against his young face. Lucian smirked as well, though it was awkward since he was living with his mother and sister for years now, while his father was away for a long time, so you can say he was the man of the house now, and he had to do so many jobs to help pay the bills and help his mother and younger sister. Though it was still strange that he was so close to his mother. 'Dammit I have been reading too many GhostyZ and smut novels,' He thought to himself, too many lewd thoughts running through his mind as every young teen has. "It's just you and me Lucian, we have to stay strong," Lucian mom says things have changed when his father left and that his sister is out on a modeling gig. - Lord_Nyx2yrCommented
My D&D knowledge confirms that this is constitution
[CON:50] - Lord_Nyx2yrCommented
this paragraph starts with a major error
"Look like I'm transmigrate this world and I'm in my old body, that's good I don't want to go through whole baby situation" just thinking about makes me uncomfortable. - Lord_Nyx2yrReplied to AbysalyounglordCh 1 1.Cliche Isekai' ***
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Truck-kun is as cliche as it gets
As he was going home by crossing the road suddenly there was a truck coming from side ways in a shock he back away to other side not seeing where he was going and just below him was a little hole enough for him stuck so after his one leg got stuck and not being able to balance the body.He rolled over on road in a way that his head got smacked on the road then blood spills like fountain and because of blood loss his eyes became blurry then darkness surround it. - Lord_Nyx2yrCommentedCh 2 Something new
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excuse me... it's called a grilled cheese sandwich
"Don't talk when eating. It's disgusting, you know. Besides, this is my first cheese toasted sandwich this year." Even though this was a simple dish, Celia wasn't a fan of cheese, so we rarely bought it. - Lord_Nyx2yrCommentedCh 43 Chapter 40 - In Space
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what ?
After reading this text Ye Jingyi became even more confused as he asked suspiciously, "Lynx is it not don't by you?" - Lord_Nyx2yrCommented
Lynx is not the name of the suit
"Eh? What does this mean?" Ye Jingyi looked at the line of text in front of him with confusion then he asked Lynx, "Lynx is it by you?" - Lord_Nyx2yrReplied to Dragoniax
the suffix 'senpai' doesn't mean elder, it means senior (as in upperclassman)
Miu was Shishio's senior so it was normal for him to call her by "-senpai" suffix. - Lord_Nyx2yrCommented
I don't understand what that statement means
Aya raised her hand, "I can!" She yanked her sunglasses, "This is... not my child!" - Lord_Nyx2yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1 Top 100 Main Tank
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despite having never played Nacht der Untoten, I know how nostalgic it is.
It was a hot sunny afternoon, a few days before his aunt's family will be arriving. Alex was in the living room playing on his PS5, killing hordes of zombies on the 50" wide screen TV. He was on level 50 on Nacht Der Untoten, a classic Call of duty Zombie map. - Lord_Nyx2yrCommented
excuse me, why is Winx club in this story?
-Winx Club