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DartUpdates
DartUpdatesLv143yr
2021-06-26 10:35

Disclaimer not a review just a rant on dumb reviews cause I hate confrontation. I do however recommend this novel, so read it if my rant has any persuasion on you. I would give it a little less but people are rating 1 stars because they cannot read clearly. They get mad he took 3 years to break through to golden core realm, for a reference the dragon princess took about the same amount of time, with the MCs total cultivation time an average genius would be peak 1st realm about to break through 2nd (golden core is 3rd). They say he has no cultivation talent no sh i t he would have been accepted into any other peak if he had any talent. There was one person who complained about him being a little sheep and beta male since he easily accepted his master as his master when he had no idea who he was. You do realize he is the only disciple on the peak and would get all the resources right? This is said multiple of times. Even if he didn't get all the resources did you want him to leave and never cultivate or how about beg to be accepted into another peak where he has to be a janitor just to cultivate the worst technique there is (MCs master gave him the best technique there is for the sect).

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DartUpdates
DartUpdatesLv14

Also something I forgot to mention 2 of the accounts weirdly has their first activity logs 4 days ago and they both made a review on the exact same 3 novels. Suspicious

xman5695
xman5695Lv14

thanks

ButterySpread
ButterySpreadLv3

Dont you also have alt accounts to rate low quality stories? Nope?! I guess only me😅

DartUpdates:Also something I forgot to mention 2 of the accounts weirdly has their first activity logs 4 days ago and they both made a review on the exact same 3 novels. Suspicious
FilledWithHope
FilledWithHopeLv5

I love confrontation. I nearly get off on it.

Limitless_Chaos
Limitless_ChaosLv1

You are true man this novel potrays honesty as we learn that even with the sign in system he is only one realm higher than the geniuses.

Circlethatone
CirclethatoneLv15

who tf does that on a site like webnovel if they're not getting paid?

ButterySpread:Dont you also have alt accounts to rate low quality stories? Nope?! I guess only me😅
Neotera
NeoteraLv3

Facts, its just kinda sad man

Circlethatone:who tf does that on a site like webnovel if they're not getting paid?
Sylent
SylentLv15

You realize that by saying "this is not a review" you already made yours worse than a dumb review, right?

UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

unless an author deletes reviews so you spam accounts to rate them low for their racism...

Neotera:Facts, its just kinda sad man
Dummy_Account_8055
Dummy_Account_8055Lv1

wow you guys have a lot of time in your hands to do something so petty.

UndeadBeing:unless an author deletes reviews so you spam accounts to rate them low for their racism...
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

What do you mean by petty? Should I not be mad at the blatant racism?

Dummy_Account_8055:wow you guys have a lot of time in your hands to do something so petty.
Dummy_Account_8055
Dummy_Account_8055Lv1

You won't be able to do anything if said racist author deletes your review. Might as well move on instead of going through multiple accounts just to review a story.

UndeadBeing:What do you mean by petty? Should I not be mad at the blatant racism?
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

I'm not talking about me, I'm more referring to the Daoist named people who spam 5 stars for an otherwise terrible novel.

Dummy_Account_8055:You won't be able to do anything if said racist author deletes your review. Might as well move on instead of going through multiple accounts just to review a story.
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Although I am offended by the racism I usually leave a review, snap a screenshot, and move on.

UndeadBeing:I'm not talking about me, I'm more referring to the Daoist named people who spam 5 stars for an otherwise terrible novel.
Dummy_Account_8055
Dummy_Account_8055Lv1

I assumed you were talking about yourself because of the "so you spam accounts to rate the novel low" the pov led me to believe you were narrating an experience from your past. my bad.

UndeadBeing:I'm not talking about me, I'm more referring to the Daoist named people who spam 5 stars for an otherwise terrible novel.
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Nah all good!

Dummy_Account_8055:I assumed you were talking about yourself because of the "so you spam accounts to rate the novel low" the pov led me to believe you were narrating an experience from your past. my bad.
Edwin00001
Edwin00001Lv4

but your name tho...

FilledWithHope:I love confrontation. I nearly get off on it.
Quietquil
QuietquilLv15

but it is kind of a review. It actually told me a decent amount about the story, and I already like that the mc isn't crazy op. Looks like he is only a little stronger than the geniuses of the novel even with the edge of the system.

Sylent:You realize that by saying "this is not a review" you already made yours worse than a dumb review, right?
GreatDaoofspace
GreatDaoofspaceLv15

Harem?

DartUpdates
DartUpdatesLv14

No

GreatDaoofspace:Harem?
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TribeOfOne
TribeOfOneLv6

This review is after reading the first 50 chapters during the trial period. All I can say is - this novel is extremely boring. First off, let me state that I'm not a big fan of Sign In novels. I've always found them to be a really boring type of system, copied from some of the worst free-to-play games. However, I went into this novel with an open mind, willing to give it a chance. The main problem with this novel isn't the Sign In system, but just that it's so incredibly boring. It's written more like a documentary about the life of an immortal, rather than a story of the events around the hero. The author has no sense of how to create tension or suspense in any scene. The MC is an almost emotionless doll that never reacts to anything around him, he's always lost in his own world. Even on the rare occasions that he gets into a fight, he has an utterly deadpan personality, and it feels like I'm seeing the author write about a walking piece of tofu rather than a human being. The fight scenes aren't completely worthless, as the MC uses a silly fighting style similar to One Punch Man, where he kills everything with a single punch, but even that just feels boring because there's no strategy to the fights. The fights get over before they've even begun, and most of the time the MC doesn't even know why the fight happened in the first place, because he's such a boring blob of tofu that he doesn't care to find out. Another serious problem with this novel is how it tries to badly ramp up the drama through scenes where the MC does an "amazing" task in front of other disciples of his sect. The problem is that the author has no idea what's actually impressive to look at through the eyes of a reader. For example, he spends several chapters talking about how "the MC dared to take one more step" in order to obtain treasures or walk on a lake, all while a crowd of background characters keeps shouting out how absolutely amazing it is that the MC can keep taking that step. It feels very artificial and forced, to the point that I want to puke just thinking about it. On the positive side, because the MC is so utterly bland, some of the side characters appear more relatable. There's a female character, a senior sister, who's actually wiling to listen to the MC's advice and words, and there's a senior brother who takes him seriously and accepts him as a rival on the path of cultivation. The problem is just that they're still incredibly shallow, up to the point I've seen. Rather than have independent personalities of their own, they feel like they were specially constructed characters created just to make the MC look better. The story tries to show us that even for a genius MC, it still takes hundreds of years to walk down the path of immortal cuktivation. While that's a nice mindset to have, the problem is when there's nothing at all happening during all those hundreds of years. TL DR : It's a boring story about an unexpressive MC doing nothing but cultivating for hundreds of years.

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