Item: Fading Scars: Scars Of The Past
Rating: 4.8
Author: Brian_Hanes_117

Brian_Hanes_117Lv13yr

2021-06-25 10:30

A very solid story overall. It's a nice change up from the horror stories and magic stories that I see so often on here. I could use something more light-hearted. I really liked the childhood aspects of the story. Keep up the good work author. I would put a bit more description into how the characters look and to describe their feelings. I think that's it. Everything else is spot on.

Fading Scars: Scars Of The Past

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