The imagination and how the writers have poured his wide scenery into the story the characters were good the storyline was hooking but there were errors spelling mistakes, punctuation and grammatical errors if the author can fix these mistakes the novel is dope. Good work author
SpilledInk
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LIKEyeah , I kinda know, it's easier to point out others mistakes then ourselves but bro I was just trying to help you giving you a sugar coated review would be hurdle In your growth, and I'm okay with reviews pointing out my mistakes it'll help me improve I'm sorry if i looked rude
SpilledInk:I thought your book would be grammatically flawless after reading your review. I checked it out. It's a great story, but sadly, your book is full of grammatical errors, spelling, punctuation and capitalisation mistakes, and tense clashes. Be nice. People will be nice to you too.
SpilledInk:Hi. If you can point out my spelling mistakes within the chapters so I can correct them, I'd be grateful.