Review Detail of The_Lost_God in TBATE- A force to be reckoned with
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So, here it is the overall story. Author's thought: 1. What?? Art is from modern world? Then my MC will also be from modern world. 2. What?? Art knows Ki?? His world has Ki?? So, be it. My MC will also know Ki. 3. What?? Art is king in his past world? Then so be it. My MC will be king. Wait. Let him be right hand of king. 4. What?? Art unlocks his mana core in age 3?? So be it. My MC will do it a few days early. 5. What?? Art falls down to save his mother? So be it my MC will also fall down. 6. What?? Someone saved Art?? So be it my mc will also be saved by an beast. 7. What?? Art will have beast will? So be it My MC will also have beast will. 8. What? Art will go Elven world.? So be it. My MC will go elven kingdom. 9. What?? Art has dragon egg? So be it My MC will also have beast pet but people will call the story copied so make the beast's birth a little different. This is the story. It's Copy Art. Paste Art. And, we have new character. Lol. Don't read it's not good. It's all original story. Nothing different. If you remove MC then Art is MC of the original with same story.
TBATE- A force to be reckoned with
Erebus512
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WinnieLePooh:The author could of had some fun and made the mc a conjurer but nope.
Yeah but you can edit it, you said augmentors release a force outwards and that Fey's force was stronger than Arthur's, when conjurers absorbed all the mana in the environment in the area creating a vacuum. If he is a conjurer how is he faster than Arthur who is an augmentor, honestly most of your story is him seemly one uping Arthur when there is no real actual reason why he is better.
Erebus512:He is a conjurer, I didn't know the conjurer awakening back then and made that mistake.
When exactly was he faster than Arthur? Sure he was about to awaken earlier but how does one awaken? They pull the mana fragments in their body to form a core. Now what do conjurers do? They pull the ambient mana from the atmosphere so it would make sense if he awakened earlier.
WinnieLePooh:Yeah but you can edit it, you said augmentors release a force outwards and that Fey's force was stronger than Arthur's, when conjurers absorbed all the mana in the environment in the area creating a vacuum. If he is a conjurer how is he faster than Arthur who is an augmentor, honestly most of your story is him seemly one uping Arthur when there is no real actual reason why he is better.
Sorry for the confusing in the last sentence I'm talking about when Virion tests them and Fey is seemingly faster than Arthur for no reason
Erebus512:When exactly was he faster than Arthur? Sure he was about to awaken earlier but how does one awaken? They pull the mana fragments in their body to form a core. Now what do conjurers do? They pull the ambient mana from the atmosphere so it would make sense if he awakened earlier.
Don't overthink on the lines. Arthur still caught the projectile in the original, Fayden sliced it apart with the crude blade. As to how he's faster, that is instinct. Its revealed later why he has such sharp instint which normally comes from experiencing many life or death scenarios.
WinnieLePooh:Sorry for the confusing in the last sentence I'm talking about when Virion tests them and Fey is seemingly faster than Arthur for no reason
