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There are many things wrong in this novel. 1.The MC wants Rias and peerage as a harem member but not only is he older than Rias's father he is also her uncle which I find incredibley weird.. 2.He is King of the underworld and he dosen't act noble at all..like for example fighting Riser(who is just a weak arrogant young master) or going for almost every woman and flirting with them openly in front of other faction leaders.. 3.The characters are shallow and many girls fall for him just because of his handsome face and because he is a little concerned for them.. 4.The charracter interaction is really bad.
childhood needs around 2 chapters.. No need other anime elements.. Let Issei have boosted gear and make him friends with MC so MC can train him (maybe) but only after Rias reincanate him as a devil.. Make MC Godly handsome since Godess is his wife but no love because of only his face because thats lazy and dunb way to develop love intrest.. Make MC powers have many other things like Sunshine and blackhole and Kamui stuff like that not only Gojo powers.. No beating strong characters easily like some bad cultivation novel.. Small harem of about 5..no huge harem...
This is nice..The first few chapters were really good even though capturing the Godess was really cliche you manage to make me feel different emotions...I hope the MC goes through serious character development..I can only feel pity for the godess...Anyways nice start and i hope you don't drop this until the Godess have a happy ending or i am going to lose it.... š¤¬š”š MY YANDERE GODESS GOOO!!!!š