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BL00DY
BL00DYLv43yr
2021-06-14 03:30

Really like story especially love plot and wish you success. Currently, the only problem is mistakes in sentences, such as using the same word twice when it is enough to do it once(like - You do you.).

System Break

Skully
4.8
198 Chs

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Skully
SkullyAuthor

Thanks man. But that's actually not a mistake. haha. Let me know in comments if you see any and i'll fix [img=recommend]

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