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AoXoEoLLv113yr
2021-06-14 20:01

Wonderful! The best game or litrpg novel I've read in ages. ............ Pacing is brilliant. Character development is really good, I have a very clear image of the characters and their personality. World background is hidden on purpose, its part of the mystery and is revealed slowly with chapter progression. ............ The author turns standard tropes of classic fantasy races on their head. It's a very unique reading experience as he completely destroys the preconceived image of things. ............ The author uses the adult content as a device to tell the story and its inkeeping with the characters. There's no forcing which is refreshing. ............ I highly recommend you give it a try. Its better than most of the litrpg ive read on amazon.

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This is a master piece perfect world building combined with well fleshed out and realistic characters all shown to us threw a deep and impresive vocabulary that makes you hang off every paragraph and word. A update speed that is impresivley fast and a unique story idea makes this my favorite work on web novel and I would compare to such books as Harry Potter or the lord of the rings. This book is definitley a fun read and I would suggest it to anyone over 18. Thank you author for your consistent update speed and for writing such a amazing book, lots of love from a new fan.

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Its got all the ticks and tacks one looks for. Its got at least one or two chapters a day, with the author randomly going screw it and releasing 10 chapters in 15 minutes. Its got a truly fantastic story, unique with plenty of fun pieces. Its got a little NSFW but its never really the main point of the book and is less explicit than other books, a nice change. Finally the character development is very nice, with each character feeling unique enough to be able to not have to even know their names you can recognise them by their actions, while also still putting the focus on our main character. Long story short; its good you should try it!

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It's actually surprising how easily you can sink into the story .I highly recommend this book if you're a fan of Eastern fantasy but not the too unrealistic kind . it's just right

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Overall, a very good novel. There’s a nice ratio of serious and lewd chapters, the characters are well-developed, serious thought went into the world design and organizations, and there’s a constant desire to read the next chapter. There are the occasional word-choice errors (scoffed used in lieu of scarfed regarding food is one semi-frequent mistake), but they’re few and far between.

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Another very well written story by Skully. good worldbuilding, character development and writing tone contribute to a great novel. The system aspects are also very well balanced so that they add to the story, rather than taking away.

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Sinful_blessings
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Just thought you desereved a quick review, this book has a well thoughtout story which captivates. it causes you to need to continue reading like an addiction :) Anyways really recommend !!! Keep up the good work

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