Item: System Break
Rating: 5
Author: AoXoEoL

AoXoEoLLv113yr

2021-06-14 20:01

Wonderful! The best game or litrpg novel I've read in ages. ............ Pacing is brilliant. Character development is really good, I have a very clear image of the characters and their personality. World background is hidden on purpose, its part of the mystery and is revealed slowly with chapter progression. ............ The author turns standard tropes of classic fantasy races on their head. It's a very unique reading experience as he completely destroys the preconceived image of things. ............ The author uses the adult content as a device to tell the story and its inkeeping with the characters. There's no forcing which is refreshing. ............ I highly recommend you give it a try. Its better than most of the litrpg ive read on amazon.

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