Past the Marigold Meadow has been a pleasure to read so far. The story reads very much like a fantasy mystery, picking and choosing what information to give the reader to keep us perfectly in the dark. The writing style and grammar have been really great so far! I've had no trouble envisioning every environment and character, and have been able to easily follow the scenes as they unfolded. People have commented on the slow pacing but in my opinion, I think it really suits the story to drip-feed information over time and not to simply reveal all its cards from the get-go. Great story that I can see myself coming to check-up on regularly! Keep it up!
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