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DemonzorLv143yr
2021-05-19 19:34

The story is really interesting but after the mc started slowly becoming dumber I lost interest like there was so many better ways to make the mc a antihero and the author chose the dumbest one he could think of

In Naruto As a Mage

Error9999
3.8
40 Chs

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Error9999
Error9999Author

5 star cuz it's my fanfic and who doesn't like what they write Or is it just me, well whatever. If there is anything wrong pls write in the comments. I'll try to read all of them.

4yr

nicehat
nicehatLv3

it seems good and has a No-Harem Tag So I give it 5 Stars but I won't read Until there is more Chapters keep going Author . . .... . . . .

4yr
WhyDo_I_StillExist
WhyDo_I_StillExistLv3

Magic. it's cool. the book was good. I'm reviewing. I just wanted to give it a 5 star but now I need to write this long-ass sentence without even knowing that the post button just lit up. it lit up now isn't that just so nice.

4yr
Forfixs
ForfixsLv10

Author is afraid to change the original story, but instead of making a character who wants the story to happen as in the manga, he makes him fail for the most forced reason that exists. Writing Quality 2 * Stability of Updates 4 * Story Development 1 * Character Design 1 * World Background 1 *

3yr
Xternal_Gx
Xternal_GxLv12

I'm honestly disappointed this story could've been much better if you didn't mini nerf the mc repeatedly. but the idea itself was pretty good

3yr
Void_Blade
Void_BladeLv2

What can i say, it's not worth reading, went through the first 13 chapters and it's confusing af, and the main characters is way way way dumber than you can ever imagine, and the writing quality is trash without even talking about all the spelling mistakes and typos, like bruh do you even try?

3yr
asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

just read the canon or watch the anime nothing change mc's just an extra just read the canon or watch the anime nothing change mc's just an extra just read the canon or watch the anime nothing change mc's just an extra just read the canon or watch the anime nothing change mc's just an extra

3yr
Comalet
ComaletLv4

no harem no harem. yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes

3yr
FeaR_Less
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