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From what I read so far, it seems to be a really solid story. Description is excellent. I use a little more in certain ways, but I won't hold that against you since everyone's style is different. The character design is solid as well. The background is good and the lore is solid. I like how you describe combat sequences. You do a much better job than most writers. I wish I saw more people do it the way you do. The story stays interesting as well. I read the first 15 chapters, so I still have a bit of work to do.