Took me some time to read through the 24 chapters published of the novel, but after giving it a read I can say that it got potential. The starting felt rather rushed or to say the least made it hard for me to imagine the scenes properly to get fully engaged in it. I would personally blame that due to the lack of imagery. But despite this, I can see great potential, as you read further and further into it, you can see the writing quality improving and the hook gets better. I'd imagine the rating I gave to be all the more earnest if I was to rate it by chapter 100. Great work so far!
Ullyr
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