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SupremeCookie
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Author's shameless review here. This fanfiction is my first story so feel free to correct my mistakes so I can make this fanfiction better. Thank you.

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In Naruto with Slightly Perverted System

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JheyDi
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gamabunda4873
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can u name chapters i feel i would like it but my brain says no to the plain numbered chapters cant help it

SupremeCookie
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Ok...

gamabunda4873:can u name chapters i feel i would like it but my brain says no to the plain numbered chapters cant help it
SupremeCookie
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All done, My friend.

gamabunda4873:can u name chapters i feel i would like it but my brain says no to the plain numbered chapters cant help it
gamabunda4873
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thank you for your blessed words my ruler

SupremeCookie:All done, My friend.
armando_ruiz
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Author please do not include shadow clones in the intimate relationships of the protagonist! I would really appreciate it!

DriftingDragon
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Agreed

armando_ruiz:Author please do not include shadow clones in the intimate relationships of the protagonist! I would really appreciate it!
Draco_Dragneel_7752
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can u write other anime with a slighty perverted system like one piece dragonball fairytail

Daoist007877
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when he is done with the naruto verse are you going to have him traval to diffrent worlds, like ( other animes, manga books or movies) to collect more girls. if you do where would he go next

Alejandro_Vera_3605
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Porque no haces uno donde reencarna en Naruto pero con el podés de controlar tu edad y la de cualquiera para llegar al principio de la historio.pero renace en la era de Kaguya para ser el padre de rikudo Sennin pero tenés que llegar unos 60 años antes para poder tener poder para luchar y conoce a Kaguya y tiene hijo después se vuelve loca por el podér y la sellas contigo para estabilizar su locura y pasan los años y entrenas porque hay un espacio para entrenar y pararon los años entrenando y calmando a Kaguya y justo antes de la guerra la estabiliza y espera que la guerra continúe cuando se rompe el sello te libera y a Kaguya también y detienen la guerra y coloca cualquier cosa como conocer a sus nieto y eso y se prepara para la llegada de los otsusuki .XD NOSE ESCRIBIR HISTORIA PERO ESA VA A SER UNA DE LAS MEJORES.ME DA PAJA ESCRIBIR Y SI ALGUIEN ESCRIBE LA HISTORIA AVISEN PARA LEER PRFA XD.TENES QUE RELLENAR LAS COSA DE COMO SE CONOCIERON Y ESO ASTA LA PRÓXIMA

Daoist_Rooster_Nim
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U did excellent no need to be shy

No_friends_
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hey someone is copying your work it has the name naruto perverted system

Chaos45
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Donne a quelqu'un le livre pour continuer si tu vas plus écrire parceque t'as maintenant une vie donc astalavista nous

Lc_The_Second
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Hopefully when he's done with Naruto Verse. He will write another novel. people should abandon the marvel multiverse idea train.

Daoist007877:when he is done with the naruto verse are you going to have him traval to diffrent worlds, like ( other animes, manga books or movies) to collect more girls. if you do where would he go next
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author pls countinue this