Review Detail of Jo_J in THE BLUE EYES [BL]

To be honest, I am not really in wolf, vampire, elf, etc. stories, but your story is different. From the very beginning, you started to describe the created world, so the reader knows the background and the history of the conflict... After reading a few chapters I have assumptions about your inspirations, influences, etc. Well done! Don't worry about errors. Most of the writers have their own editors, but here most of us - doing everything by ourself ;)