Review Detail of MrChinchila in THE BLUE EYES [BL]

Item: THE BLUE EYES [BL]
Rating: 4.4

Review detail

MrChinchilaLv12yrMrChinchila

Ok, ok. I left a comment in you story, yet I'll reiterate. I love the world building in this. Yet, at the same time felt like a slog to read at certain parts for one reason: info dumps. For the rest I'm curious where this will go and I will continue reading it. This one goes to my library. Besides that, the story is good and interesting so far.

THE BLUE EYES [BL]

26stars

Liked by 2 people

Replies5

26starsAuthor26stars

thank you for your review. I'm gonna write a better story in the future

2yr

26starsAuthor26stars

Hello again! I'd like to thank you for your positive feedback again. I've made some changes in my writing using your advice. If you have time, please read the story again to see whether I made improvements or not. I really appreciate your honest review. Thank you!

2yr

MrChinchilaLv1MrChinchila

I'm a bit busy today, I'll do when I can.

26stars:Hello again! I'd like to thank you for your positive feedback again. I've made some changes in my writing using your advice. If you have time, please read the story again to see whether I made improvements or not. I really appreciate your honest review. Thank you!

2yr

26starsAuthor26stars

Don't worry, I just informed you that your review really helped me. I didn't force you to read again 😂

MrChinchila:I'm a bit busy today, I'll do when I can.

2yr

MrChinchilaLv1MrChinchila

Haha, not what I meant but okay. Anyway

26stars:Don't worry, I just informed you that your review really helped me. I didn't force you to read again 😂

2yr