Beautiful story. Though I’m not really interested in bl, I still read it as I should. Congratulations you’re going places. Your English was good. Still invest in something like Grammarly to help catch mistakes you didn’t know where made, a beta reader is also great but none the less. Good job.
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LIKE26stars:Thank you so much! And I'm so sorry if I make you uncomfortable because it's a BL story