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OllieZ
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2021-05-21 13:59

(Review made at chapter 19. Maybe Ill update it in the future) - Reincarnation into a realistic Pokemon World as a kid. - Baby phase is skipped. Starts at 5 years old. - Story focused on world building, family feels and learning. - Uses Pokémon Color Talent. But it is more intuitive and not the usual Rainbow Colors Talent. - MC's golden finger is to know Pk talents and some weird feeling to know his future Pokemons? I'm not really sure. NOT SYSTEM. - Slow paced. You're going to get a lot of criticism because of this on webnovel. Maybe post this story on other sites like FanFiction, it fits better there. Good luck with your story! I'm not really a fan of starting slowpaced stories, but I'm a sucker for Pokemon stories so... Thanks for writing!

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Ballad
BalladLv5

Nah man worst part of this story is the PTSD of a grown man who's afraid of Pokemon that just rubs me the wrong way a MC who's scared of Pokemon

_Rei_
_Rei_Lv4

Can't really blame him. . . MC loved Pokemon for what they were shown as in anime. But when seeing a brutal murder done by one, any sane person will be scared.

Ballad:Nah man worst part of this story is the PTSD of a grown man who's afraid of Pokemon that just rubs me the wrong way a MC who's scared of Pokemon
Ballad
BalladLv5

Ya but he's a grown man you'd think he could push past it

_Rei_:Can't really blame him. . . MC loved Pokemon for what they were shown as in anime. But when seeing a brutal murder done by one, any sane person will be scared.
carnage212356
carnage212356Lv4

that's a rather insensitive thing to say, but it's explainable by the fact that in the fic the theorizes that the body influences the soul which is why he acted childish, so his trauma still affects him like it would a child, besides grown men can have trauma and never get over it just think about returning and veteran soldiers.

Ballad:Ya but he's a grown man you'd think he could push past it
dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4

just want to make clear.PTSD is experienced by grown as man and is a problem because they can't face it.so ur saying that he can overcome ptsd because he is an adult is invalid

Ballad:Nah man worst part of this story is the PTSD of a grown man who's afraid of Pokemon that just rubs me the wrong way a MC who's scared of Pokemon
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