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Everything here is beautiful. This is a deeper story than most I've found on Webnovel, and I really appreciate the little footnotes the author makes to define things that aren't obvious. There's a quick drop-off into the story that leaves you confused for the first two chapters, but I promise once you get into it, Devil Child is phenomenal. The only reason this review isn't a full 5 stars (it's sitting at 4.6 for me) is because of the somewhat abnormal update schedule.
Devil Child
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I loved the prologue, so that was really well done. The first non-prologue chapter might use some extra detail between Noe's first appearance and when they return six months later. The chapter after that, the entrance to Sympathy, could benefit from making the entire teacher discipline scene a bit clearer (what did the nerd do, how was Noe protecting his classmates, what was he supposed to be learning, etc.). Otherwise, as is with any story, readers need to just power through the first couple chapters to get into the real meat of a story.
SEP1A:Thank you so much for your honest review! In what ways do you think I could make the first few chapters a little easier to follow?
Thank you for going into more depth about it! As for the teacher disciplinary scene, my intent was to make it confusing as a reflection of Noe's mental state at just entering a new school, and a special one at that. All the best with 'Hero's Genesis'!
vilagwrites:I loved the prologue, so that was really well done. The first non-prologue chapter might use some extra detail between Noe's first appearance and when they return six months later. The chapter after that, the entrance to Sympathy, could benefit from making the entire teacher discipline scene a bit clearer (what did the nerd do, how was Noe protecting his classmates, what was he supposed to be learning, etc.). Otherwise, as is with any story, readers need to just power through the first couple chapters to get into the real meat of a story.
SEP1A:Thank you for going into more depth about it! As for the teacher disciplinary scene, my intent was to make it confusing as a reflection of Noe's mental state at just entering a new school, and a special one at that. All the best with 'Hero's Genesis'!