Review Detail of The_Young_Flash in Virtual World Futuristic Gunners Online

Of course, I gave myself a five as a shameless author. This is my third novel and I wrote it with the novel Magic Bullet Magic Land as inspiration. I just felt that there were no meaningful novels that did guns and sci-fi weaponry justice in fantasy worlds. Either the protagonist is too shy and weak-willed or too straightforward and makes the story somewhat lame. This novel is my attempt at finding a balance that keeps the story intensely interesting without leaning on stupid tropes like being shy when seeing a naked girl or other similar nonsensical tropes. Read the first seven chapters, since that is one huge prologue, and tell me what you think. Chapter seven beyond is when he goes to the fantasy world.