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2022-10-03 03:14

Really good stuff and very interesting to see all of these worlds mixed together. Worried that you took a little too much to chew though with the amount of stuff you’ll need to know, but so far it’s good (ch10). I would only recommend you having the mc being a little more… wise? Ik he’s a teen but I feel like someone really understanding the ramifications for what he does would be more interesting. Also would like to see him conversing with big figures more like Death.

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