Review Detail of HotIce in Noob Player
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Hello, a few words from the author This is a slow-paced story, please be patient with :) and this is a rework of my second novel Tribe Online. since this is a game novel, I will try to balance 40% time within the game, 40% time about his real life, and the remaining 20% is about competitive scene, e-sport, and others. I will try to balance it like this. Criticisms are welcomed, but sometimes (or maybe most of the time) people think that sh*t-talking is being "harsh" to critic the author while actually, it's not a criticism, you are being rude. I will delete such a review if there's one. thanks and hope you enjoy the story.
Noob Player
HotIce
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Hobo_Hank:Hey, I just thought I should let you know there's a grammar mistake in your synopsis! "Adventure" should be "Adventurer", Because you are referring to someone who would be going on an adventure. Feel free to delete this comment after you see it! I hope to see more chapters soon!
Nik_16:though im a fan of other 2 novels, i dont like the genre of this novel.... also the information which the synopsis gave..... i have given up on such stories....though i wish all the best to author
you don't have to, the original one only has a few chapters in. like seven chapters. it does not matter whether you read it or not. you will only suffer if you read the first version since it's one of my early novels too, the grammar sucks.
Pandoras_Keeper:How different will the rework be? Is it recommended to read the former version (eg. for more information) or will there be massive changes?
I keep trying to read this book, but every time I run into the Runner aspect or the eSports stuff, I have to put it back down. Having been through a similar episode as the MC with getting my leg smashed, it makes reading sport type novels a major turn-off. But one day I'll get past the first chapter!!! One day!! ...just not today...
Hi author. I am just here to sincerely ask (rant/complain) 2 things. First, can you PLEASE UPDATE MORE. Once a week is toooooooo slow. If you uploaded like, once a day, you would have been in like, top 5 with the potential of the novel. Maybe even more. YOu would have gained sooo much mooore money. Second, can you please make it 40% game, 40% pro and 20% rl? Or 50% g, 30%p, and 20% rl? I know what you are envisioning and I support it. It's nice, really. Not a bad idea at all! But, it just feels like a waste reading 3 chapters of strolling around aquarium with kids (I like them, really. Just, don't focus the novel on them) when we could have had 3 chapters of a tournament instead. Sincerely, thank you.
