A borrowing system where MC borrows, you know, and rises up from adversities. It truly is a great premise and the storyline was rather awesome as well. I also stand by on your ideals as well— that the first chapters of the book should build around the character first before anything else. Keep it up, author. This book shows great promise. I'm adding this to my library. ^-^ Cheers!
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