Review Detail of silent_walker in Unlimited Borrowing System

A high paced system novel... The writings are easy... not much vanity there. Readers can hook in immediate with the clear writings. The character tones is better than I expected. I only read about 3 chapters so can't tell about the story development. But the system looks promising. Now the problems I see in the readings... - you missed a lot of punctuations. t there's apparently no comma or periods in the quotations. fixed it as soon as possible. -the story missed a bit of the depth in the beginning. readers would judge the story reading the very first chapter if they will continue or not. pay attentions to that. -descriptions. work on that. - pay attention to the little details... overall the book looks promising with a unique system... good luck