Review Detail of CocoTg686 in My Alpha Roommate

There’s potential but spent too much time smh. The MC is way way into herself like covering up insecurities, childish & reckless almost to point of unlikeable & got in way of story flow. ML is better fleshed out, but it’s like you’re suppose to already know the backstories. Definite potential & perhaps worth checking out after some editing/rewrites. I just could not finish it. Too much going on about extraneous while actual info pertintent to the story was left out, it felt. More like stream of consciousness writing often. Kudos to the author for writing & sharing their story & hope their future writing gets lots of reading with great characters.