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CocoTg6866mthCommentedHmmmm
Then, Tania was seven. She was bunched up into the back of a carriage by a hunchback and brought to the monastery gates. Menkar enslaved her with his magic, the little girl screaming as he performed the ritual. He had taken a part of her soul, collecting it in the tangerine soul stone that he wore around his neck. That ensured that she would serve the Cetus Monastery — until Menkar released her to someone else. But he would not. He coveted her as his own personal servant and he was ferociously possessive about her.- CocoTg6866mthCommented
I don’t why she’s trying to go back. Hello, freedom that way —> No more freedom, go back to Menkar <—
All her life, she wanted only one thing: Her freedom from Menkar. She failed. - CocoTg6866mthReplied to rap_monster
Agree, and nicely put. I want to keep reading but it gets a little confusing or tedious
The few sconces that lit the corridor had dimmed, producing only a dull light that lined the hall. She waited for a sound, anything, to caution her, but heard nothing — only the rhythmic drumbeat of her panicked breath. She glanced left and right, and when she saw that was alone, she scurried down the walkway. At its end, she found a deep stairwell leading down. A sense of foreboding hit her, and goosebumps rippled across her flesh. She felt like returning to the bedroom but didn't. How could she take such a chance with someone she did not know? What if the guards caught her? What if the King caught her? She was a spy, after all, from the monastery — a place that was considered sacred amongst all the kingdoms. The place where the werewolf kings came to offer their prayers and sacrifices. If the King came to know that Menkar had sent her, the monastery's name would be in shambles. However, a thought rattled her. What if Menkar denied who she was? - CocoTg6866mthCommentedCh 180 Chapter 180
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This ml sucks so far. He has a very large mountain to climb to not suck anymore
Nora fisted the silky bed cover as Damon pounded himself inside her until she saw stars. He was like a beast, ravishing her from behind and she loved it. - CocoTg6868mthCommented
Gross. How does he redeem himself, how?
Damon's eyes flashed in agreement. "Undress." - CocoTg6868mthCommented
It’s still a game dude!
Damon nodded in approval. He likes when women are direct. No games. - CocoTg6868mthCommented
WHAT THE……I didn’t realize there’s a hierarchy with where & wont. BLECH!
Marcy was flustered and it took her a few long seconds to collect herself and respond, "Not necessarily marriage, but I at least need to know that we are going in that direction. We can do other stuff. I'm OK with anal or giving you a blow job." - CocoTg6868mthCommented
What??? Right there, I’d be walking out saying no way & correcting that
"I know that nothing is confirmed, but technically, we are engaged.", Marcy said breathily. - CocoTg6869mthCommented
Yeah right
He touched her blonde silky hair while saying, "You are a beauty, Marcy. I'm proud to be your father." - CocoTg6869mthCommentedCh 1 Future Pet
- CocoTg6861yrCommented
Wait, what?
"What are you thinking about?" She heard a deep voice that startled her out of her thoughts. - CocoTg6861yrReplied to Cristina_Maria_9697
- CocoTg6861yrReplied to Single_AsFxck
Is it bad I didn’t really notice? Lol
"I don't want to hurt you, but I won't hesitate to hurt you if you so much as think of coming close to me. I am Alicia Queen, and I won't allow myself or whoever this body belongs to, be devoured by a fucking wild animal, you hear me? I have a mission to accomplish, so if you know what is good for you, turn the fuck around and leave." Alicia hissed, jerking her head in the direction the animal had come from. - CocoTg6861yrCommented
Wouldn’t be the first or second or third who worked in a strip club and moved on to be someone big
"You have no idea how happy I am that you are up! I was so scared." She said and broke into a sob of relief, leaving the girl who was lying on the bed wondering what was going on. - CocoTg6861yrPosted
There’s potential but spent too much time smh. The MC is way way into herself like covering up insecurities, childish & reckless almost to point of unlikeable & got in way of story flow. ML is better fleshed out, but it’s like you’re suppose to already know the backstories. Definite potential & perhaps worth checking out after some editing/rewrites. I just could not finish it. Too much going on about extraneous while actual info pertintent to the story was left out, it felt. More like stream of consciousness writing often. Kudos to the author for writing & sharing their story & hope their future writing gets lots of reading with great characters.
- CocoTg6861yrCommented
Ok, I just can’t. Even in the plausible, this just sounds…um no. Thank you for the reading thus far. Good luck.
"Nope, I have to get drunk as fast as I can," I said to him in determination. It was like my rule, ya know? Get drunk as fast as you can and then dance crazily, get in a fight with a couple of people, go around the room, make a couple of friends, play beer pong, while drinking occasionally getting more drunk. - CocoTg6861yrCommented
Dude.
Don’t tell this dood have never- ok never mind. - CocoTg6861yrCommented
Mature
Jumping I put on some black ankle heels, clicked some silly selfies, pouting, and poking with my tongue and sending it to my former friends to make them jealous.