Review Detail of jake_miller in Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Ive read the first 220 chapters and i can say the first half was good but after they started being together it didnt feel like a romance, instead it felt like he was grooming her and manipulating her just for sex. later she talks with his grandmother only made me realize in the month or so that they have been together they dont talk plus you add in the whole soulmate crap which i find to be lazy writing for those who cant make a beleavable relationship. started to think it would get better because others told him to talk to her but that hasnt happened so i give up. for those that like smut with a bit of story that you dont get answers to its the book for you for those that want a beleavable relationship go elseware.