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I feel like he is not learning from his mistakes. When we went brutal on those weaker kids parents got involve and he lost his eye. So killing a random weak peron in a cave when he doesnt know the area or her background feels stupid for all he knows her high mage dad is waiting a few miles away and his actions lead to his death. This chapter feels like a way to show how brutal he has become but to me he feels like a kid that refuses to learn from his mistakes. He keeps feeling bad when he kills people for no real reason and hasnt looked back and relized most of the times he does leads him to trouble.
Ive read the first 220 chapters and i can say the first half was good but after they started being together it didnt feel like a romance, instead it felt like he was grooming her and manipulating her just for sex. later she talks with his grandmother only made me realize in the month or so that they have been together they dont talk plus you add in the whole soulmate crap which i find to be lazy writing for those who cant make a beleavable relationship. started to think it would get better because others told him to talk to her but that hasnt happened so i give up. for those that like smut with a bit of story that you dont get answers to its the book for you for those that want a beleavable relationship go elseware.
the fact that the mc disregards feelings he had while human and having no secondary characters to relate to makes you have no attachment to him. if it wasnt for all the humans dieing id rather have a story about them. Overlord has the same problem mc becomes unrelatable after abondoning his human side causing me to drop it. ill give it a few more chapters but ill probably end up droping it due to only being a power fantasy with an unrelatable mc.
How is Cheyenne smart enough to have built up her own company but stupid enough to have not kicked karen to the curb ages ago. With how bad she is treated by almost every family member she has and still give them the benefit of doubt like this just shows incompetence and make me wonder why Lucas has stayed with her since both her sister and miss stone have her kindness and looks with less to no stupidity.
The fluff is getting annoying and the elders of the Parker family should have warned everyone in there family not to mess with Lucas after the auction. With how stupid some of these families act its hard to believe that they hold any power in the business world at all. Anyone with a brain that was at the auction could put together that he must be the secretive chairman/ big spender at the previous auction it makes no since at this point for people with a powerful background to not have an idea of who he is.
The bad thing is i blame Tristan for this not Andrew because Tristan has shown that he has learned multiple times about keeping things from people yet he still does it. If not him Lillie should have said something because she knows how much it hurt for the truth to be hidden from you.